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### Original Text So, why do parents persist in putting pressure on children when it affects them so negatively? ### Grammar Check Report **Error 1: Punctuation** * The sentence starts with "So," which is a coordinating conjunction that should be followed by a comma. However, it is not necessary in this sentence, and removing it improves the flow. **Corrected Text** Why do parents persist in putting pressure on children when it affects them so negatively? **Explanation** Removing the initial "So" makes the sentence more concise and direct. If you want to maintain the informal tone, you can rephrase the sentence to start with a more conversational tone, such as "I wonder, why do parents..." or "The question is, why do parents...". **Additional Suggestions** * Consider adding more context or a transition to connect this sentence to the preceding or following text. This sentence appears to be a standalone question and may benefit from additional setup or explanation. * To make the sentence more engaging, you could rephrase it to focus on the consequences of parental pressure, such as "The negative impact of parental pressure on children is alarming, but why do parents persist in this behavior?"

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