COMIC

**Title: "Little Red vs. The Dragon"** *Dynamic comic book style with exaggerated features and bold lines* A dramatic low-angle shot captures a young girl in a vibrant red hooded cape standing defiantly at the edge of a jagged cliff. Her wild, windswept hair and billowing cape create a sense of motion against the turbulent sky. The girl's determined expression and clenched fists convey her readiness for battle. Looming above her, a colossal dragon with razor-sharp scales and gleaming eyes fills the upper half of the frame. Its massive jaws are agape, spewing forth a torrent of flame that illuminates the scene with an eerie orange glow. The dragon's wings are partially unfurled, creating an imposing silhouette against the chaotic sky. The background showcases a swirling maelstrom of clouds in rich purples, deep crimsons, and fiery oranges, emphasizing the epic nature of the confrontation. Jagged rocks and wisps of mist frame the bottom of the panel, drawing the eye upward to the central figures. Bold, black outlines define the characters and landscape, while speed lines and motion blur accentuate the dragon's movements. Exaggerated shading and highlights create a sense of depth and drama, typical of high-energy comic book art. The overall composition emphasizes the contrast between the small but brave girl and the terrifying might of the dragon, capturing the essence of an unlikely hero facing overwhelming odds.

**Revised Script:** **Page 1** **Panel 1** * Exterior of the hospital at night. A dark figure with glowing red eyes is perched on a tree branch, overlooking the hospital. **Caption** Outside the hospital, a sinister presence lurks... **Page 2** **Panel 1** * Back in David's ward, Nathan Criss is speaking to David and Terry. **Nathan Criss** ...and I'm telling you, werewolves and supernatural creatures exist in the real world! **David** (looking shocked) What?! That's impossible! **Terry** (equally stunned) How can that be true? **Page 3** **Panel 1** * Nathan continues to speak, unaware of the danger behind him. **Nathan Criss** We don't have much time, guys- **Page 3** **Panel 2** * The dark figure from the tree, Kael Kellan, is now standing behind Nathan. David and Terry see him and try to warn Nathan. **David** (alarmed) Nathan, behind you! **Terry** (surprised) Oh no! **Page 4** **Panel 1** * Kael Kellan grabs Nathan by the neck with one hand and steps out of the shadows, revealing his appearance. **Kael Kellan** (to David) You. I've been looking for you, David. You see, I'm the one who bit you... and I want you to join my pack. **Caption** Kael Kellan: Pale skin, brown curly hair, brown beard, hooded eyes, red glowing iris, convex nose, deep bite teeth with fangs, wearing a black trench coat, black jeans, and white top with Adidas Superstar shoes. **Page 5** **Panel 1** * A woman with sleek red hair, monolid eyes, and a curvy body rushes into the room. **Woman** Kael, let him go! **Page 5** **Panel 2** * Kael Kellan drops Nathan and jumps out of the window, disappearing into the night. **Kael Kellan** (to David) I'll be back for you soon, David... **Caption** Kael Kellan jumps through the window, leaving David, Nathan, and the mysterious woman behind. **Page 6** **Panel 1** * The woman and Nathan rush to the window, looking out into the night. **Nathan** (looking out the window) He's gone... **Woman** (concerned) We need to get you out of here, David. Now. Corrected issues: * Format and structure: The script now follows a standard comic book script format, with clear panel descriptions, character dialogue, and captions. * Pacing: The revised script breaks up the action and dialogue into manageable chunks, allowing for better pacing and visual storytelling. * Character descriptions: Character descriptions are now presented in a clear and concise manner, making it easier for the artist to visualize the characters. * Dialogue: Dialogue is now more concise and natural-sounding, with a focus on character interaction and development. * Visual storytelling: The revised script focuses on creating a clear visual narrative, with descriptions of setting, action, and characters that will help the artist bring the story to life. Note: Some creative liberties were taken to enhance the script's clarity and flow, while maintaining the original tone and intent.